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Look at me - I'm drabbling!

"How's that cramp, Spike?"

I had a hard time keeping the shock and surprise out of my voice as I answered. I'm not sure I managed.

"How's that cramp?" This from the bird that wouldn't say boo; meek, mild-mannered Miss Maclay?

I look at her and I realise, I'd never really looked or seen before. Her shy demeanor, her habit of hiding behind her hair - an effective smokescreen, that. Allowing her to work steadily, unobtrusively, towards her goal of letting the light in, making it reach the farthest corners. This girl is anything but weak; she's strong, made of steel, and observant. She finds her strength within her heart, with which she loves, without judgeing, without fear. And with a profound sense of humour.

"How's that cramp, Spike?"
I think it may just be starting up again -- for you, pet.


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Sep. 19th, 2003 04:56 am (UTC)
I think it may just be starting up again -- for you, pet.

hee hee...love it!

i always loved how spike saw the true value of tara [some writers certainly elaborate on that in fanfic.]
Sep. 19th, 2003 05:17 am (UTC)
i always loved how spike saw the true value of tara

And me! But I always had the feeling that of the Scoobies, Tara was the only one who saw something of the true value of Spike as well.

Thanks for reading, BTW.
Sep. 19th, 2003 05:42 am (UTC)
definitely. a lot of authors explore that as well.

and no need to thank me, silly girl. ;]
Sep. 19th, 2003 05:49 am (UTC)
Yeah - I know I'm being silly but...I just never thought it would be so hard to give up a few lines to the world. I'm still tempted to delete the whole entry!
Sep. 19th, 2003 05:58 am (UTC)

i kow how you feel, though. i did my first sunday 100 last week and i still wanna take it down. lol
Sep. 19th, 2003 05:08 am (UTC)
Very, very nice! Love that last line.

Now you've taken that first step, hope we see lots more!

Sep. 19th, 2003 05:13 am (UTC)
That last line -- well, let's not forget that Spike is eeeevillll, people!
Sep. 19th, 2003 06:56 am (UTC)
naughty! :-) Thanks for sharing.
Sep. 19th, 2003 07:06 am (UTC)
Re: Oh,
You're welcome. Glad you enjoyed my bit of naughtiness!
Sep. 19th, 2003 06:57 am (UTC)
I'll say it again - very well done, G. I am proud of you! And glad you posted it on spiketara as well!

Okay, now we MUST see more from you!
Sep. 19th, 2003 07:13 am (UTC)
Who knows? Although I must admit that this kind of response is quite encouraging, I'm not sure inspiration will strike again soon...This may just have been a fluke, I don't know.

Just saying - don't get your hopes up.
Sep. 19th, 2003 08:01 am (UTC)
Sweet! I always loved Tara's teasing of Spike in that episode.
Sep. 19th, 2003 08:32 am (UTC)
Me, too. I think it's my favourite bit of dialogue in that ep ;-)
Sep. 19th, 2003 09:30 am (UTC)

Spara!! You wrote Spara!!

And it was cute, snarky Spara too! Squee!!

::bounces all over you::
Sep. 21st, 2003 04:23 am (UTC)
Ouch! and eh...cheers!

::bounces right back::
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